magazine artical finished.

Tedium draft 2 from ryanfisher43
I have used some more iconic pictures from the short film which were options for my posters I tried to keep everything level using a ruler to keep them a line. 

my magazine review draft 2 just need more stills from my film...

Tedium draft 2 from ryanfisher43

I decided  to make the writing closer together to reduce white space also I decided that I wanted to add more still frames from my short film to add more colour and drama to the poster, I also decided to re-type the image I snapped from empire magazine, I chose to do this because I couldn't match the fonts and styles exactly so by doing this they are all matching and look the same, this gives my review a more professional look and feel to it.

draft film review

Tedium from ryanfisher43

I have chosen to do my film review in the style of Empire Magazine, i chose to do this because then i could include a real Empire Magazine film review to give it the real affect. I believe that that this is a good first draft for my short film review because it includes media terms and created a want/need to watch the film for the readers self.  Although I do believe it will have to have some slight editing to be done because of font style and a couple of other small errors but i wait to speak to my Teacher about this to make sure I do not make it any worse. I presented this to my class they gave me feedback of the work that...
-there was to much white space
-the advert did not align with the rest of the article
-the other film review on the bottom ruined the style of the article
-needs more pictures from the film
-improve the clarity of the single picture.

my first film review.

My review of the Due Date review.
I believe that I did go into enough detail although missed out some small pieces of relevant infomation about this magazine article. From analyzing this magazine article I have learnt that I would prefer to do my magazine article in the style of Empire magazine because it is easily laid out for the consumer to understand, also my TA are more likely to read this magazine. It allows for colour to be brought into the article within tittles etc.

• Blue tittles
• Right hand side is description
• columns 
• single large picture with smaller around.
• verdict at the end
• easy enough lay out to get similar.