My Interview About My First Film Attempt

This is me reflecting on my 1st attempt at my short film, explaining how I didnt think it worked as a short film, what I wanted to improve and also change.
I believe that i should have taken the advise more critically to improve my 2nd attempt at my short film this way i could have met what the viewers wants and needs of the film could have been there fore creating a happier audience. Also i believe that if i had been more confident infront of camera asking the audience questions myself on how i could improve my short film.